從03年到14年的大作文提綱如下:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
As is vividly shown above in the picture, in front of the football stands a young athlete, imagining the goal keeper is so giant that hardly can he score the goal, on the contrary, the goal keeper minimizes himself, wondering whether he can keep the net. Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning is as deep as ocean.
例2011
As is shown above, on the lake floats a boat, on which one couple of tourists are throwing waste into the lake, which has been in a mess and full of various wastes including lunch boxes, fishbone and its like. The primary purpose of the picture above is that due attention should be paid to urgent problem that people’s inappropriate behaviours lead to the severe destruction of environment.
例2008
As is shown above, in the picture run two-legged people, heading toward the same direction side by side, holding each other’s shoulders tightly, with crutches being put aside. The caption indicates, “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel extensively.” The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.
第二段意義闡述段的攻略講解,在這一段,第一句提出論點,論點要準確,即話題要趨同不要跑題;論點要清晰,即在首句中要有能夠涵蓋主題的關鍵詞;論點要精彩,即語言要有亮點,比如采用一些復雜語法像非謂語動詞、從句類、介詞短語等。第二句可用虛擬語氣強調論點,如正面話題,Were there no the Hope Project, those children would never receive the precious knowledge. 可提煉出這樣的句式:Were there no sth., sb. would never do sth. 如負面話題,Were the situation to continue, we would pay high price. 第三句就論點展開論述,就如同中文中的論證方法有對比論證、舉例論證、引用名言論證等等,下邊介紹幾種常用方法:
(一)因果法
1.There are many causes/reasons for the dramatic growth/decrease. Firstly,...secondly,...finally,...
2. A number of factors can account for the change in...
(二)例證法
1.As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year. Although their incomes are still low by international standards, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can — be it money or goods—to help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves.(01年)
2.A case in point is the successful launching of "Shenzhou 7 Spacecraft" which sets china in a high position of aviation and space flight. Although it means a great achievement for us Chinese, we are facing new challenges in the future and need to do further research in space technology. Another illustration is closely related to us, the examinees. If we pass this test and are fortunately admitted by a university, we shall not stop making efforts. Instead, we are confronted with the challenge of conquering the difficult graduate courses. We still have to strive for success in our future academic study, employment and career.(04年)
(三)比較與對比法
The difference between a man who succeeds and one who does not lies only in the way each treats opportunities. The successful person always make adequate preparations to meet... as they duly arrive. The unsuccessful person, on the other hand, works little and just waits to see them pass by. Obviously, the two different attitudes towards opportunities may lead to quite different consequences.