第一段:寫作內容需涵蓋兩點:自我介紹,寫信目的。文章開門見山就是自我介紹,用到了這樣的表達:I am Li Ming who will go to study in your university and live together with you in one department. 其中的“I am …who…”這個句型來自于建議信的表達,放在這里也十分貼切。接下一句話表明了寫信目的:Now I am writing this letter to tell you some of my habits and ask you for some suggestions to adapt myself there.
The table above clearly reflects the statistics of(對象)happening in a Chinese city(地點).According to the table(表格,圖用chart),in 2005【the traffic accidents】in the Chinese city still failed to arouse concerns of both drivers and pedestrians.From the information given in the above column chart,we can see a striking contrast in【mobile-phone subions】between developing and developed countries from 2000 to 2008.
During this period,there has been a dramatic increase from【0.4 to 4 billion mobile phone subions】in developing countries,while(轉折)that of developed countries remained steady under 1 billion during the decade.
Taking into account what has been argued,we can come to the conclusion that this established trend is positive積極的and therefore acceptable可接受的.And I am firmly certain that this trend will continue in the years to come. In my point of view…In order to……………,relevant laws and regulations must be established and enforced to…………….Drastic measures should also be applied to ensure that…………